I just wondered if anyone would be interested in reading a story I've recently started on fictionpress.com under a new username, the username being 'Steampunk Showers' and the story being called 'Young Again'. Here's the link: www.fictionpress.com/s/2987486…
And here's the summary, just in case:
Sophie Heathers - a withered, ninety year old woman - is placed in the body of Brooke Braigly, a young woman barely out of her teens. She has three months of youth to herself. But when scientists come to collect her, she doesn't want to give the body up.
It would be greatly appreciated if any budding readers and writers out there could give constructive criticism, and pointers for improvement. Thanks, everyone!